A peacefull place

All the people are full with joy,

A little boy is playing with his dog in the silky snow,

The couple on the ice are enjoying there self’s,

All the peoples teeth were chattering,

They were as cold as an ice cube,

The bridge was covered in white silky snow,

All of a sudden a raindrop fell out the blue sky,

The ice starts to tremble and then the ice waved goodbye,

However the people got of the ice as fast as possible,

and everyone was alive and they get all cosy and they watch Netflix and chill.



Bye Kyle 6.12.16 class mr vaughn


3 Comments so far

  1.   im2016 on December 6th, 2016          Reply

    That’s a nice poem u got there good luck

  2.   es2016 on December 7th, 2016          Reply

    I like your poem Kyle I hope you win

    Errin 😀

  3.   rumail on December 9th, 2016          Reply

    wow kyle never thought that you could do this. But you proved me wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your best pall rumail:)

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